Friday, 19 October 2018

Roll a story

In Room 25 we have been learning how to write a narrative and what to included setting character and a problem and here is my story.

Character: A beautiful Princess
Setting: At a magical castle
Problem: Ate a Poisoned berry 


Once every morning as the sun comes up from the horizon, the maid came to wake-up the princess and gave her daily fresh fruit. 

Little did she know, she did not know that a intruder and the maid was locked up in one of the rooms. Then when the made gave her a fruit there was banana, strawberry and poisoned berry. 


She ate all of her breakfast she fell really ill. Later on that day she went to sleep and never woke up.  

5 comments:

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  2. HI Ebony this is Lucas from room 7.I really like your blog and it inspire me to do more on my blog. You have a really good imagination you could write little kid's book's.How often do you do these activities in class? Peace out Lucas

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  3. Thank you for commenting on my blog

    blog you later.

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  4. Hi Ebony, my name is Jared, I am from rm 23. I really like your blog but I was looking through and saw this and I thought this is amazing. If you were the princess and you could have anything in the morning what would it be?
    Please check out my blog http://odsjareda.blogspot.com/

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  5. Hi Jared thank you for check out my blog and i will go and check out your blog\

    blog you latter.😀😁

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